Spoken Free Verse: Rejected Draft

photo credit Harold Ross Fine Art Photography

 

As I recover from a concussion ( please visit my Go Fund Me to learn more ) I thought this week was a good time to explore the audio files I have accumulated on my phone over the year.  Often inspiration strikes when I am away from a pen and paper and I can’t type the words quick enough into a note.  Recording observations as RAW audio free verse poems are satisfying for me.  Background sounds are incorporated into the piece which, I think, adds to the impromptu performance.  Also, there is a desirable amount of light pressure to form a creative thought in one take.

The fourth poem in my Spoken Free Verse study is a short poem I have titled “Rejected Draft” recorded Monday, August 27, 2018.  It seems I walked into that Monday with a premonition how the week will end.  This poem is short, sweet and, in my mind needs little editing.  I present it, like the other poems in this series, as raw work in the original form.

I recommend listening to the audio file while reading the poem.  I open Google links in Music Player for Google Drive.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1oCGwNjro6KL1rLbkGh7i-ArYAK062UoD

Rejected Draft

by Shannon Laws

 

I start off the week on a Monday

straight as paper

shoulders back

spine stiff as a post

 

by Friday I am crumpled

broken and bent over

like a rejected chapter

from a writers typewriter

thrown to the floor

 

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